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Through My Watchful Eyes
Contributed by
daz3312
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Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 08:47:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I notice you walk everywhere I go
And yet I’ve never seen you
I think of you day and night
Yet I don’t know who you are
I listen to your voice wherever I walk
Yet I’ve never heard you speak
Your voice is therapeutic to my stress
Yet we’ve never met
Your absence is killing me
Yet I don’t even know if you’re even there
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daz3312
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2006-04-08 08:47:24]
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Re: Through My Watchful Eyes
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by FRANCO on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 08:58:41 AM AEST
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you are exceptionally good at you writing your beautiful words will certainly bring that invisible person face to face one day.
WELCOME TO YPDC.
FRANCO
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Re: Through My Watchful Eyes
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by TheStoryTeller on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 09:03:07 AM AEST
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It sounds as if you are writing about god, in this poem...
it is a good first write too. |
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