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Highlander’s Transforming Cross
Contributed by
Lilly-Quill
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Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 09:32:31 PM in AEST
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His flair with words passionately ascribed, alluring to all
He holds me near, I hear, without ever touching my wall
I am his night; He is ever my day and yet oceans apart
Ironically and similarly like Lady Hawke, I reach to touch his heart
Shall I tell the sky I want to fall upon the leaves of fornication
If not for that future kiss, I’d have no reservation
No other melts my heart, sweet solace of perfection
I found him once and lost him twice; indeed, we lost direction
He mirrors my grey soul of black and white reflection
I could transform the world with one kiss, without his rejection
The odds, and difference between, can succumb to equalization
My life’s a dream state of abstraction, for his fond realization
Rapidly time flees away, ascribing a brand new day
Will this gallant knight beard the castle wall, I pray
Love fears many things, yet true-love is fearlessly tamed
He is a masterful design of destined art, I would love to frame
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Lilly-Quill
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Re: Highlander’s Transforming Cross
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 11:54:01 PM AEST
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You have conceived this poem with great love and care, every word that has been penned has come from your heart with strong flavor of emotion. Wonderful poem and equally beautiful title to match. Congratulations.
FRANCO.
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Re: Highlander’s Transforming Cross
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by JGB on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 02:55:45 AM AEST
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| This is Good! Well written. I can feel you. |
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Re: Highlander’s Transforming Cross
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 10:07:58 PM AEST
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~*Lilly-Quill*~
WoW, you certainly know how to captivate ur reader and leave them in awe. I'm so glad I came across ur pages. Impressive and well worth the read. A brilliantly penned masterpiece. Thanks so much for sharing ur beautiful poetic verses with us.
*warm huggers*
~*Suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Highlander’s Transforming Cross
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 11:40:57 AM AEST
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"Love fears many things, yet true-love is fearlessly tamed"... I really like that line....
Good poem, I like the way you didn't use too many discriptive words and 'drown out' the poem. You used what you had to to make it beautiful.
Take care.
David |
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