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Shadows Afar
Contributed by
TiaXander
on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 08:09:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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Planned on
Rescuing you
Whisking you away
To a place
We could
Forever stay
Yet I hesitate
Watching you
From shadows afar
Wanting you
With all my heart
I ache and yearn
Just to hold you
Feel as if
I can give you
So much more
My love for you
would never be in vain
Yet nothing will
Ever be the same
If I could
Make you understand
Why I feel this way
Still cant help but think
Youd be better of
Without me
I slip away
Undetected
In the shadows
Of the night
Into the twilight…
Copyright ©
TiaXander
... [
2006-04-07 20:09:05]
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Re: Shadows Afar
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by Kimberlynn on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 08:24:08 PM AEST
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| ....I think that was just breath taking. Good job, I love this. |
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Re: Shadows Afar
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by luckedout on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 02:18:23 PM AEST
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| Wow, I know what you mean. I have the same feelings all the time, but like you said. You just cant tell sometimes, keep on writing because i love reading. |
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Re: Shadows Afar
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 10:29:15 AM AEST
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great poem.. This was well written..
Take care
christina |
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