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Fading
Contributed by
wordsLEFTunsaid
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Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 07:34:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The lonliness won't seem to go away
The darkness creeps in, here to stay
where has be gone?
you wait for him from dusk 'till dawn
He's not coming back and you know it inside
he promised he'd be here, I guess he lied
nothing to do with yourself
no where to go
you didn't think life would ever bring you this low
the tears fall down, they won't ever stop
so you pull the trigger and you drop
you open your eyes and he's standing above
the last thing you hear
he whispers to you
"the only thing that never faded was my love"
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2006-04-07 19:34:08]
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Re: Fading
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by JGB on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 03:47:49 AM AEST
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That's sad.
Does it all run together because of the pain? |
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Re: Fading
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by Tiffyo4 on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 11:17:13 AM AEST
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you know i love your work i told you so yesterday
Tiff |
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Re: Fading
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by no_1nos_me on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 03:19:47 PM AEST
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| Nice write |
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Re: Fading
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by aegurly on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 07:15:26 PM AEST
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that is so sad but a really great write keep it up!!!!
read mine and comment pleeez!!!!
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