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I'll take you away
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 07:04:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Breathe in, Breathe out
I'm trying to gain my composure
You take me breath away
It's pouring outside
I know you're lonely
I'll take the rain away
You bite the bullet
You swallow the pill
I'll take your pain away
All this has gathered up in you
Your heart is heavy
I know, I've felt the same
Lay your weary head
On my weary pillow
We'll sleep the night away
Look me in the eyes
Tell me you don't care
I'll believe the words you say
Clear the fog off your window
See me waiting there
I'll take you away
I'll take you away
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Re: I'll take you away
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by Kimberlynn on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 07:22:34 PM AEST
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| Awwwww....That is one of the sweetest thing I ever read. You did really well, I L-O-V-E-D it. |
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Re: I'll take you away
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by In_a_while on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 11:56:14 AM AEST
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very wonderfully written! it's good to read great writing
once in a while...
All this has gathered up in you
Your heart is heavy
I know, I've felt the same
a favourite stanza of mine... but the whole piece is
very touching. Keep it up! |
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