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Because of you

Contributed by snowflake on Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 05:13:51 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Is it something i did
what did i say?
what did i do to make you feel this way.

Make it stop
the pain i mean
i want to scream.

do you not love me
i love you.
why don't you call me do you not care?
i mean i'm sorry if i'm not what you want me to be,
but your the only person i know who is but doesn't care about me.

I have known you all my life
and i can only remember you calling me on my birthday twice

what kind of daddy are you
i mean Father
i have dadddy
your just a sperm donor.

I don't need you
i have grown stronger and wiser without you.

If you don't do anything else atleast you call
but i forgot your so lazy you don't do anything at all.

you say you try well while your trying i'm crying.
you don't have forever
i'm going to be grown up before you know it.

you say you love me why don't you try showing it.
Maybe you should grow up and stop being a child
i thought the only child here was me
but i guess i was wrong

Thanks for breaking my heart so many times now
so now i can be strong.

Copyright © snowflake ... [ 2006-04-07 17:13:51]
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Re: Because of you (User Rating: 1 )
by snowflake on Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 05:18:41 PM AEST
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i'm sorry at the top on the fourth little thingy down and the last line in that (5th line) "but your the only person i know who is so close but doesn't care about me" is what its suppose to be sorry please feel free to leave me comments on how to improve thank you
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