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I'm on the way home
Contributed by
Archie
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Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 01:15:30 PM in AEST
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A slow steady march preludes and permeates this song. If you can hear that in your head then you will find a melody all your own for your march through life. This song represents my march. It was written in my youth and modified through my experiences to fit my life today. This is the poem version.
I''m on the way home
through mountains and valleys
I''m gonna walk until
I see God walk with me
I can''t make it to heaven
all by myself
so please send your spirit unto me
I''m getting tired Lord
but I''m still walking on
I''m on the way home
been gone for a long time Lord
I''ve lost my way in life
and need guidance from your word
I can''t make it to heaven
all by myself
so please write your word in me
I''m getting tired Lord
but i''m still walking on
I''m on my way home
through cliffs and jagged vestiges
across the threshold
my brother walks with me
but i can''t make it to heaven
all by myself
so please make a nation for me
I''m getting tired Lord
but i''m still walking on
I can''t make it to heaven
all by myself
so please make the way clear for me
I''m getting tired Lord
but I''m still walking on
. . .so please save a place for me
at your table
Copyright ©
Archie
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2006-04-07 13:15:30]
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Re: I'm on the way home
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by sandypoet on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 01:18:56 PM AEST
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| aweeeeeee.. I love it very much. and I sure know that He does as well. Needing to look down on this earth to see someone want Him so bad to be a part of His life... |
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Re: I'm on the way home
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 01:52:24 PM AEST
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God walks with us no matter we are tiered or not, pray to him or not because he love us more then his life. He is our Good shepherd for those who experience his unbound love can’t stop but praise him and thank him for ever. PRAISE HIM FOR HE IS OUR GOOD SHEPHERD.
Your poem has a timeless fragrance of faith. Good piece of work.
FRANCO.
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Re: I'm on the way home
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by sillysal on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 02:46:32 PM AEST
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You said it so well :)! Beautiful :)!
:)Sandy |
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Re: I'm on the way home
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by freespirit on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 03:36:41 PM AEST
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Hi Archie
Another great write every morning when
I get up I say good morning Lord thankyou
for you blessing and your love and I blow him a kiss hope you dont think im crazy It my way to start my day take care have a good day
hugs Freespirt |
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Re: I'm on the way home
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 04:15:56 PM AEST
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Very nice gift here, nice read.
RL |
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Re: I'm on the way home
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 05:38:21 PM AEST
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Oh Archie..I think this is my all time favourite of all your songs... This is extremely beautiful....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: I'm on the way home
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 09:02:50 PM AEST
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~*Archie*~
My dear friend it's so good to see you back and posting again. I have missed u heaps.
A moving and very well penned piece of poetry that takes us on a journey through ur life. I have as of late felt myself lost and the only one who can help me is the Lord above. Thank you for sharing this with us. It's always a pleasure to venture ur pages my dear friend. Welcome back.
*warm huggers*
~*Suzie Q*~ |
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Re: I'm on the way home
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 12:35:08 PM AEST
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He is the good Shepherd and will hnever tire to go after His sheep. No matter who tired the sheep is, lHe will carry it.
Like in "
Footprints in the Sand"
Lovely composition.Enjoyed.it
Elizabeth
PS Just got new machine, desperate to learn all its tricks.and catch up with all I am,behind.
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Re: I'm on the way home
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 12:35:09 PM AEST
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He is the good Shepherd and will hnever tire to go after His sheep. No matter who tired the sheep is, lHe will carry it.
Like in "
Footprints in the Sand"
Lovely composition.Enjoyed.it
Elizabeth
PS Just got new machine, desperate to learn all its tricks.and catch up with all I am,behind.
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Re: I'm on the way home
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 02:16:48 PM AEST
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A most comforting poem and well presented i might add. Great lyrics also. Your a veteran of this place and it shows in your craftmans ship. Well done as always.
Ben |
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Re: I'm on the way home
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 10:32:41 AM AEST
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This is a moving rendition of your faith journey through life. The poem meaningfully portrays life's goal of joining God in paradise.
Archie, thanks for sharing you journey with us
Will |
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Re: I'm on the way home
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 31st July 2014 @ 02:29:43 PM AEST
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beautifully heartfelt!
hugs n' love nessa |
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