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Confusion
Contributed by
silver_runaway
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Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 11:27:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Forever ago; an eternity
We could say love; such an innocent word
How long back was that; I can't recall
Shades of emotion; from laughter to tears
We could say hate; such a sad thing to think
How far have we taken this; it seems like so long
Raindrops on the window; a reflection of how I feel
We could say goodbye; that would end all of this
How much pain you’ve made me feel; tears no longer come
Memories of you follow me; you won’t leave my thoughts
We could say we’re sorry; try to fix all of this
How would it feel; I wouldn’t know what to say
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2006-04-07 11:27:18]
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Re: Confusion
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by TiaXander on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 05:17:24 PM AEST
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| "in the silence I long to hear what goes unsaid" a line from one of my poems that popped into my head when I read yours. Lots of depth and honest felt emotion.... |
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Re: Confusion
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by Kimberlynn on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 07:11:05 PM AEST
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| I liked the feelings and such from your poem. You were honest, I like that. |
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