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SHE IS MY LOVE.
Contributed by
FRANCO
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Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 08:08:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Wonder what I felt that woke the sleeping man in me
till the night gone by I saw only an animal in me,
wonder if she too felt the deference in me,
amazing to experience the real good in me.
Wonder will it last forever in me, for at least until
my heart throbs in me,
wonder why love is so sweet with me - made a man
out of an ugly beast, that was me
wonder why she provoked the love in me, is it only to
stimulate salty tears over the ever bleeding wound in me.
Wonder there be a time to expose her the heart in me
that weeps for her every second slowly putting an end to me
wonder fearfully, might the mighty scary beast re-emerge in me
but I shall perish before the man dies in me.
Wonder not, because she still dwells in me
the very thought of her makes my throbbing heart accelerate in me.
Wonder why that star is shining bright for me? Because she is my love
lived on this earth as the soothing star; only for me..only for me..only for me....
(FRANCO).
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FRANCO
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2006-04-07 08:08:25]
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Re: SHE IS MY LOVE.
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by TheStoryTeller on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 10:36:22 AM AEST
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Beautyful and heartfelt...
Nicely penned! |
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Re: SHE IS MY LOVE.
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by sillysal on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 12:55:25 PM AEST
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I'm sure your wife is smiling through tears as she reads this beautiful poem to the angels in heaven.
My sincere sympathy!
:)Sandy |
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Re: SHE IS MY LOVE.
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 04:23:49 PM AEST
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I am terribly sorry for your loss... The love shines thru beautifuuly in this post..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: SHE IS MY LOVE.
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by Lilly-Quill on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 01:50:33 AM AEST
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There is a unique style to this whimsical beating muse, which oozes out love's aching loss. I loved the rhythm, the depths of longing so magically portrayed.
In the beginning (biblically foretold) stars were called angels. Enchantingly, now, your angel is like “the Star who always watches over you.” How wonderfully endearing.
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Re: SHE IS MY LOVE.
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by JGB on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 03:21:36 AM AEST
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I don't know what to say.
"Wonder why that star is shining bright for me? Because she is my love
lived on this earth as the soothing star; only for me..only for me..only for me...."
I feel that way when it comes to my husband.
Beautiful sentiment.
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Re: SHE IS MY LOVE.
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by inoc on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 05:08:24 AM AEST
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Sorry to hear your wife is gone....your write is so splendid....God Bless You
coni |
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