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The Hurt The Pain
Contributed by
sadaddy
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Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 12:40:17 AM in AEST
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The hurt you caused me will never go away
The pain I feel will forever stay
It lingers deep within my heart
It pushed us far apart
It tore us down
It made me frown
The attention you would divert
It only gave me pain and hurt
The hurt you caused me will never go away
The pain will forever stay
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Re: The Hurt The Pain
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by Alison on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 01:28:54 AM AEST
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i no how you feel.
great write. |
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Re: The Hurt The Pain
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 08:24:17 AM AEST
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I do understand when some one close to our heart hurt's us deliberately, it Really hurts.Your poetries are truly heartwarming. keep it up.
FRANCO |
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Re: The Hurt The Pain
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 04:14:02 AM AEST
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| nice write... sorry for your pain. |
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Re: The Hurt The Pain
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by ruthie1983 on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 09:55:55 PM AEST
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| Interesting write and heart touching. Even though days go by, sometimes it is hard to get rid of the pain, poetry makes us express how we feel. Good Job!!! |
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Re: The Hurt The Pain
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by Lilly-Quill on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 11:41:23 PM AEST
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Pain can be a subtle shield of pride, it’s defence acts like a projector reflecting off others. For the light or truth is to bitter-a-pill and too harsh for this defensive stage. This turning away , projecting the problem instead of the truth, is a sad protective shield which fades; but only with enough space and time. Sorry for the philosophical analogy; I do ramble on so at times.
This is really good, though; and a most provocative and intriguing muse. Actually, I really do empathize. Thanks for sharing.
~Lilly-Quill |
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Re: The Hurt The Pain
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by Lo2681 on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 12:47:15 AM AEST
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This was a nice way to make pain into something beautiful... and u have by with this poem. Beautiful
~Lo |
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Re: The Hurt The Pain
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 01:39:28 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry you're pained like this. I wish you fast healing. In time ur wound will heal. Take care and may ur days ahead be much brighter.
big warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: The Hurt The Pain
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 08:03:05 AM AEST
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Sad but well written.
hang tuff.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Hurt The Pain
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 09:23:08 AM AEST
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Incredible sadness, but I feel the ability to write out that which we feel, can only help.
And you have displayed your emotions in excellent rhyme. Be that as it may, keep the
faith. Your pain is only so that the joy and wonder that awaits, is recognized. : )
Great post!
~Breezy |
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Re: The Hurt The Pain
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 12:06:35 AM AEST
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I can understand how you fell.
Heartache are the worst kind of pain,
I hope someday you will be rid of that.
good write. |
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Re: The Hurt The Pain
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by candyistoo-sweet on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 06:07:35 AM AEST
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| that pain seems to linger huh? its not always easy to be human is it. i like the art you create with words. |
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Re: The Hurt The Pain
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by sandypoet on
Tuesday, 15th August 2006 @ 05:38:14 AM AEST
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| Aren't you glad that when we ask for forgiveness, God forgives and never remembers it again. How we should love others. So hard. but by His grace we can do all things. |
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