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Empty

Contributed by Amazon on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 10:20:02 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I wonder down an empty street
middle of the day and not a soul I meet

I walk up to an empty house not a creature inside
everything’s gone not a place to hide

not a thing on the shelves or the walls
except for the blood streaking down

everything takes on an un-natural hue
and the only thing that fills my mind is memories of you

oh how different things could have bin
now I don’t know if you’re alive or dead

yet you still haunt me night and day
oh why cant you just go away

I take a step down the hall
just want to stand there and scream out loud

for all the pains of my past
are coming to the surface at last

I must continue to fight
cant let this consume me

im getting drawn under
feel like im drowning

and then you come along
you grad my hand

you fight against the pull
and release me from despair

you refuse to give up on me
what have I done to make me so lucky

for I know in my heart I do not deserve you
but I also know not with out you id do

sometimes I wonder if you were nothing but a dream
cause its all to goog to be true what else could it be?

Copyright Â© Amazon ... [ 2006-04-06 22:20:02]
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Re: Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 02:49:27 PM AEST
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good write, i liked it, the grammar mistakes seemed to draw away from the poem, but good beginning, sorta tortured-soul type thing it seemed to me.

~natalya

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