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Crying Out
Contributed by
xDiSaStErPiEcEx
on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 06:01:21 PM in AEST
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Crying Out...
things dont have to be this way
i dont have to go on (day after day)
but i do for you
i dont know why
i could just die
all im saying is
will i survive?
can you break your ways
is this more than a phase
do we always have to fight
this isnt right
i cant handle this pain
im no longer sane
i cant control how i cry
i just want to die
im crying out
i need you now
you say i can make it
but i dont see how
i dont need him
like i need you
just give me a hint
what can i do
can i get you back
or have i lost
just tell me my mistakes
what have they cost
how long will it be
until im fine
what do i have to do
until your mine
how long will it be
until our last
how long will it be
until i can erase my past
im crying out
i need you now
you say i can make it
but i dont see how
i see no hope for me
i dont see how this can be
whats happening
to me
im crying out
i need you now
you say i can make it
but i dont see how
The End.
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Re: Crying Out
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by Kimberlynn on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 07:05:26 PM AEST
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| Wow, sweet job! I can feel how confused and helpless she is. Good job(Just capitalize and punctuate a little more :) |
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Re: Crying Out
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by aegurly on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 08:16:49 PM AEST
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omg I don't know what to say great poem gosh you have talent hey if u want sometime IM me and we can chat !!!!
Hey check out I MISS YOU by aegurly l8er |
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Re: Crying Out
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by luckedout on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 11:47:33 PM AEST
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| great poem lots of expression, i can relate, good luck |
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Re: Crying Out
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by candysears on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 09:51:05 AM AEST
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Nice write..
I feel you are suffering thru all the pain..
God Bless! |
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Re: Crying Out
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by MeenieMo on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 05:41:53 PM AEST
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| hey this is meenie mo. great poem. i can relate fully to that. amazing job |
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