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DIEING YOUNG
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 05:45:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Dieing young is not hard to do
just pretend you know what you wanna do
take a couple of pills and die real slow
or take a cut to the wrist and let the pain show
disappear and never worry bout your past
you wanna die alone burn yourself with gas
the only thing you have to worry bout is
where you do it at, do it in a open place
with no gates to hold you back
but before you go remeber what you've done
you were the one who wanted to die young
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Tiffyo4
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2006-04-06 17:45:22]
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Re: DIEING YOUNG
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by StoneAngel on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 05:57:17 PM AEST
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| wow great right very moving and sorrowful. Very powerfull stuff. I've gone through this and survived. |
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Re: DIEING YOUNG
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by sandypoet on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 06:00:11 PM AEST
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about the poem.. great..
about the subject stupid. so much to live for. pick yourself up and think of better things. tired of living asked the Lord to come help you. I lost a sister very young age 9. the hell I have been through since her death. would you like to for others to feel sick all their lives without you. you cant kill yourself and then hover over all them to see if they mourn for you or thinking you will get your way. please.. dont ever think this again. GOD LOVES YOU if no one else will. |
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Re: DIEING YOUNG
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by Lilbabe on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 09:32:52 PM AEST
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| this poem is very sad & deep.i like it & it made me think of all the thoughts i have trapped in my head. u know it made me think i dont really wanna die...theres so much i have 2 do before i die & im strong enough 2 endure this worlds torture i know that if u search deep enough u can find the strength 2 survive. |
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