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I Love You More Than Words Can Say
Contributed by
ilovelillbj
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Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 10:48:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I love you more than words can say,
It truly takes my breath away,
To hold you in my arms so tight,
To sleep against you through the night,
Means more to me than I could say
It truly takes my breath away
I’ll stick with you babe, come what may
And wake to be yours everyday-
To see you shine your smile so bright
There’s no maybe or no might-
I’ll stick with you babe, come what may
And wake to be yours everyday
Happiness that won’t decay,
Your love keeps sadness well at bay
And makes the world around me right.
What makes my soul soar like a kite?
A happiness that won’t decay-
Your love keeps sadness well at bay
I love you more than words can say,
It truly takes my breath away,
To hold you in my arms so tight,
To sleep against you through the night,
Means more to me than I could say-
You truly take my breath away
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ilovelillbj
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Re: I Love You More Than Words Can Say
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 11:41:02 AM AEST
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| This is a very sweet poem. I enjoyed reading it and like how you rhymed all the way through. |
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Re: I Love You More Than Words Can Say
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 12:53:19 PM AEST
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This has the making and feel of a very tender Hallmark card. Nice write. I enjoyed the read.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: I Love You More Than Words Can Say
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by ilovelillbj on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 12:55:38 PM AEST
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| hallmark card?? is that a good thing?! |
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Re: I Love You More Than Words Can Say
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by Alison on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 01:01:05 PM AEST
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| very sweet and touching. awesome write! |
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Re: I Love You More Than Words Can Say
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 01:42:03 PM AEST
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Speaking 4 my self good and bad are relative terms so in essences have no place here. As 4 this lovely peice of writting, it has an honest charm and a most straight forward quest. Not 2 mention the impact it posesses on the heart of one who reads it
beautifuly done . . .
Ben. |
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Re: I Love You More Than Words Can Say
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 11:07:27 PM AEST
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Great job, I love the repitious rhyme scheme. Few can pull that off, and few try. It takes courage to attempt it. Well done. A very romantic and warm write.
BTW, one of my favorite lines of all time from a poem by Charles A Beard was on a Hallmark card "When it is dark you can see the stars".
Take it as a compliment dear.
BRAVO
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Re: I Love You More Than Words Can Say
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 07:37:55 AM AEST
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This was very lovely..I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing this..
Jenni |
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Re: I Love You More Than Words Can Say
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by Eveline on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 04:19:11 PM AEST
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| That's very sweet, I love it good job,good and good job. |
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Re: I Love You More Than Words Can Say
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 02:06:55 AM AEST
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| This was a sweet poem and i loved reading it and how you rhymed the words... ty for sharing it .. |
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