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Place Your Arms Around Me
Contributed by
ilovelillbj
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Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 10:46:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Place your arms around me Ben,
And let me feel your skin;
The loving glow that it exudes
Fulfilling me within.
Place your arms around me Ben,
And let me hear your heart.
‘Love’s Rhythm’ I have heard it called,
Knew its truth from our start.
Place your arms around me Ben,
And let me breathe your scent.
Drives my longing crazy,
Yet starts my mood’s ascent.
Place your arms around me Ben,
And please, hold on with all you are.
In your embrace I’ll make my world
Where inside we’ll never part.
Copyright ©
ilovelillbj
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2006-04-06 10:46:53]
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Re: Place Your Arms Around Me
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by AstraLee on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 11:05:09 AM AEST
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| I thought this was great as I can never get my poems to rhyme! Lovely poem. |
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Re: Place Your Arms Around Me
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 07:41:42 AM AEST
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"my kind of rhyming scheme.." lol..
Beautiful write... I enjoyed the use of repetition here...
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