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Songs of yore
Contributed by
Archie
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Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 10:42:24 AM in AEST
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In dark times bleak
let me hear you sing
the whisperings sweet
and wisps of spring
When the cold winds blow
freezing o''re your heart
let love melt the snow
and sad times depart
When we walk through perilous times of war
And death turns your heart ''pathetic to the core
help me remember your healing
clouds are dark but sun''s revealing
refreshing times are soon in store
writing poems of love and singing songs of yore
Life has its hard times
we try to ignore
hurt''s between the lines
hidden in heart''s core
But there comes a time
when you have to cry
let the pain subside
in the bright blue sky
The past it hurts
The past it scars
tearing pieces from your heart
but we forget
that memories
also hide times of glee
when we remember times of healing
and we see the sun's revealing
dead trees coming alive in spring
and birds in branches starting to sing
the waves gently roll into shore
proclaiming times of love and songs of yore
Proclaiming times of love
And songs of yore
Copyright ©
Archie
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Re: Songs of yore
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by TiaXander on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 10:27:23 PM AEST
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| Spoke to me and I hold on fast to what it said...I once read a jap. comic hmm Fruits Basket I think...anyway one thing that just stayed with me to this day was..."No matter how cold the snow may be it will always melt" or something like that.....What I love to include in my poems is that memories never die. LOVED IT! your poem I mean hehe |
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Re: Songs of yore
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by Willofree on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 01:04:48 PM AEST
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I really like this piece, which seems to mix song and poem. The message is woven into a wonderful varied structure and design, which is creative and unique. The wording and imagery are wonderful.
Masterfully done, Archie
Will |
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Re: Songs of yore
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 05:58:07 PM AEST
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Yes exactly, nice spiritual growth.. I feel the love abundantly in this poem. I like to sing to Him to Archie.
hugs,
RaquelLeah |
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Re: Songs of yore
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by Michael_Bevins on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 02:46:26 PM AEST
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| Very nice, I enjoyed. And it has shown me i need to expand my vocab a little more lol. Great write. keep it up ;) |
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Re: Songs of yore
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 31st July 2014 @ 02:32:45 PM AEST
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truly beautiful, the setting is so peaceful, this flows so gently,
hugs n' love nessa |
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