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oh no sixteen at last
Contributed by
jonquilcottage
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Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 04:41:45 AM in AEST
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Sweet sixteen and never been kissed
My baby is having a birthday
my eyes are filling up with mist
As my memories go astray
I think back to that time long ago
when I was that fragile age
All the dolls you would outgrow
now boys were all the rage
sitting looking at someone cute
it really was not nice
quickly you became a mute
hands as cold as ice
heart flutter they just walked by
He is asking for directions
Do you know where I can buy a pie?
My legs just turned to melons
Its funny that I remember this
As clearly to this day
My first look, my first kiss
My thoughts just drift away
I know that she will go through this
She thinks that I dont know
I want her to share her first kiss
It's something I wont outgrow
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Re: oh no sixteen at last
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 06:08:34 AM AEST
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| very nice,aaw to be sixteen again |
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Re: oh no sixteen at last
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 07:31:27 AM AEST
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They grow up so quickly don't they?
Saying that it only seems like yesterday when I was 16 and trust me it was a looong time ago!
Cute write.
J. |
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Re: oh no sixteen at last
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by dougnut on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 09:34:10 AM AEST
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Sweet words.. great read well done
God bless you doug:-) |
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Re: oh no sixteen at last
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by Winterland on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 10:25:00 AM AEST
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I too remember those days. Life was just getting interesting! LOL Very well done and thank you for the trip down memory lane!
Jennifer |
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Re: oh no sixteen at last
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 10:28:30 AM AEST
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Very well done, your words brought a tear to my eye as I remember my turning 16 and then my daughter who is now 18 and has moved out on her own. (one more to go)
Thank you for sharing
*Hugs*
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Re: oh no sixteen at last
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by huwbeauty on
Sunday, 21st November 2010 @ 04:38:51 AM AEST
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| I like this very much.my kids are growing up fast and this reminded me of being that age. |
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