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Diamonds
Contributed by
Kimberlynn
on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 09:11:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Have you ever seen wet diamonds?
Those cold, liquid, stones
That shine and gleam as they trickle down
Until their gone
They pour out of pools of color
And the stream flows
Down porclein peach
Tear droplets falling
Rocks yet un-cut
Down a wet face
Have you ever seen these diamond tears
Flying down a child's cheeks
These are sacred, if you a called
To take the time
Build a dam
So the tears can stop
Copyright ©
Kimberlynn
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2006-04-05 21:11:54]
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Re: Diamonds
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 09:24:06 PM AEST
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This was very impressive and completely beyond what I expected from the title. I love the way you used diamonds to descibe tears and water. A very deep and sweet write.
KEEP WRITING
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Re: Diamonds
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by slogan on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 12:13:16 AM AEST
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| good job...jh |
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Re: Diamonds
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 05:07:24 PM AEST
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Right on Kimberlyn! I give you an A-. The minus is the typo; shouldn't "if you a called" be "if you are called"? I believe I caught a diamond of hope from my eye!
I think you can request an edit to correct for future readings. |
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Re: Diamonds
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by JGB on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 08:00:36 PM AEST
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Kimberlynn,
I don't know what to say other than "It's great!"
Joanna |
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