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Her Mask
Contributed by
oreo910
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Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 08:50:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She smiles a mask of joy,
But inside she cries for the boy,
The mask of beautiful colors,
Hides her like sleeping under covers,
She hopes for a day to go back in time,
But for now she rewinds only in her mind,
He's so close but so far away,
He's in her grasp but still he won't stay,
She can only hide her tears of pain,
She can only wish to stop all the rain,
Outside could be sunny but her world is not,
She wants him back in her life back in the plot,
She wears a mask and cries inside,
Her mask is her only way to hide.
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oreo910
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2006-04-05 20:50:11]
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Re: Her Mask
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by Kimberlynn on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 08:55:48 PM AEST
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| Okay, you rock. It actually has a really good point, and I can relate to it, good work. |
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Re: Her Mask
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 09:11:59 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write. Its like you were describing me to the T but i have to hide all emotions. Enjoyed reading. |
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Re: Her Mask
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 09:28:31 PM AEST
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A really splendid write. It moved well and I enjoyed every line.
Well Done
SCM |
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Re: Her Mask
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by Alison on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 09:46:35 PM AEST
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| very wonderfully said! i no just what u mean, awesome write. |
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Re: Her Mask
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by slogan on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 12:14:34 AM AEST
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| great write...jh |
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Re: Her Mask
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by Lilly-Quill on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 02:01:05 AM AEST
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Well, done. Although few, now-days, actually wear a mask of joy. Still, the overall view is remarkably ascribed brilliant. There is actually a summery view at the dynamics of relationships, with their power struggle, going on throughout this masterful masterpiece. Thanks for sharing.
~Lilly-Quill
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