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Penned In

Contributed by LoveStruck_Hippie on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 06:33:57 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles







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Re: Penned In (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 07:08:58 PM AEST
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WOW!

Shannon this is wonderfully penned in
[sorry . . . couldn't resist mate]

And so beautifully displayed. This was all-round perfect, hun.
The message and the analogy were superb! I love the last
stanza best!!

Great work!!

*hugs*
~Breezy


Re: Penned In (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 08:03:30 PM AEST
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very very nice write
i really liked reading this. i get this feeling alot.
All poets can relate to this poem and I must say it was wonderfully written
keep up the great work
-trini


Re: Penned In (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 09:08:27 PM AEST
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Loved the title and the meanings that it took on. I really got into the picture as well. Great write Shannon. Peace and hugs, Laura


Re: Penned In (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 09:41:52 PM AEST
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A superb job. Cuts close to home. Though I have never spent serious time in jail I have spent a few days inside over a misunderstanding. I have to say those few days were some of the most emotional days in my life. The human mind doesn't know how important room and freedom are to daily sanity.

Great job!

SCM


Re: Penned In (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 10:43:28 AM AEST
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You are true to the core friend it is indeed hard to get out the wind within. A Good poem and a good picture to blend with it.
FRANCO.


Re: Penned In (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 10:03:02 PM AEST
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Terrifically poetic-
There's much to be said within these few words..
I especialy liked the 3rd stanza.

B


Re: Penned In (User Rating: 1 )
by JGB on Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 12:49:10 PM AEST
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I've been here before. This was written very well.


Re: Penned In (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 12:45:02 PM AEST
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i liked it alot

Tiff


Re: Penned In (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 10:39:36 PM AEST
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Woohoo! A Shannon write! I'm so glad you posted, hun.

Gosh, I think this one is one we can all relate to. The torture of writers block. *kicks it*

I think you did really well on it, the flow is good, and the words compliment each other. You have really grown as a writer since you first came here.

Great write, hun.

Love ya tons,
*hugs*
Phil xxx


Re: Penned In (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 04:27:29 PM AEST
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first and foremost I love the poem.

Secondly...

Great,great presentation.

5 stars!

J.


Re: Penned In (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 06:34:24 PM AEST
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i know the feeling...nicely done!

wiz


Re: Penned In (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 04:19:50 PM AEST
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Beautifully (ahem) penned and presented. Wonderful wordwork.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy


Re: Penned In (User Rating: 1 )
by artjunkiekyle on Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 12:49:39 PM AEST
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our frustrations sometimes seem too unbearable, but it is obvious that you let nothing get in your way. excellent write. thanks for posting!

-kyle


Re: Penned In (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Sunday, 22nd June 2008 @ 01:53:49 AM AEST
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again - beautiful!




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