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Magic Died
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 06:30:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Silver treads
Held together
Puppeteer
Making dance
Fools thought
Was real
Though
Not a chance
Puppet
Breaks
Spell
Ends
Strings cut
Torment
Over
Magic died today
Copyright ©
NoSaint
... [
2006-04-05 18:30:01]
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Re: Magic Died
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by Kimberlynn on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 07:00:31 PM AEST
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| You know, I like your style. I have never read someone's poetry that was written that way, its unique. I like it. |
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Re: Magic Died
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 09:11:20 PM AEST
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| Short with tons of meaning. I liked how you presented it here. Great write. Peace, Laura |
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Re: Magic Died
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 10:03:21 PM AEST
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Something very new from you, and I like it much. Everytime I go away when I come back you have amazing poetic works waiting that I have not read, and they seem to be something of genius. Well done as always my friend.
Bravo!
SCM |
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Re: Magic Died
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 11:29:51 PM AEST
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yes Shari this fits entire situation to a tee and I understand it perfectly. The magic has died and its sad. We learned a lesson along the way with this though didnt we? This is wonderful and I love the abstract within it.
huge hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Magic Died
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by EmptyGirl on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 03:04:41 AM AEST
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| A very unique poem. I find the more I read it, the more I like it, and I liked it very much to begin with. :) I am constantly amazed at the talent of the poets on this site, yourself included. Thanks for the poem :) |
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Re: Magic Died
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by JGB on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 12:45:03 PM AEST
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| Unique. I like the way you write. |
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Re: Magic Died
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by Tiffyo4 on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 12:44:07 PM AEST
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i liked it even though it wasn't my cup of tea i still liked it
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