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LOVE ME
Contributed by
Forgotten_soul
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Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 02:07:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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All around
the angels gather.
My dread grows
as the arrow pierces my heart.
It impales me
and darkly
my essence
drips to the broken ground.
In a haze of shock
I call your name
while oblivion approaches.
Now alone
my cry of sorrow is unheard.
This is your love.
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Forgotten_soul
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2006-04-05 14:07:43]
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Re: LOVE ME
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by Emmanuel on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 02:45:11 PM AEST
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| Stop tilting your head, your view of life seems slanted, reach out and feel |
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Re: LOVE ME
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 02:54:20 PM AEST
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reaches into the readers heart. Sadly there are people who dont know how to love. Nicely done, if this person makes you feel like this move away from them, this pain isnt worth it.
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Re: LOVE ME
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by Winterland on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 03:08:18 PM AEST
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I loved the imagery you created in just a few short lines. Well done.
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Re: LOVE ME
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 04:31:08 PM AEST
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| lovely poem. the pain is so real thanks to the imagery you created. very nicely done! |
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