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my life in general
Contributed by
randumbchit
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Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 11:39:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My life is a cycle of heartbreak and disappointment
Whenever it becomes to joyful I know I have an appointment with pain
It pulls me into the drain
that tears my soul apart like a tub of water
being pulled by the gravity of my obsession
caused by my old friend depression
I wish I could break the cycle I’m stuck in
it’s the rut that I live in
I wish I could just give in
I want to live in another place
But that opportunity was not given
I feel as if I’m stuck in a pile of muck
Like an old shoe I have been cast aside into a puddle
I am ignored by the cars that go by
I sit on the side of the road all alone
I wish I could find a place in witch I feel at home
When will this pain end?
The period of healing has just begun
My skin is still raw from the chafing wind off cold voices
A sound is not heard from me
Thoughts scream from inside me
Then every things stops only echoes
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Re: my life in general
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by onceandagain on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 08:58:05 AM AEST
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You said that this was written from a trip over a stair, but to me, it sounds as if you have had a period of depression of your own. A good write, I could see myself in parts of it.
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Re: my life in general
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by RLWildPassions on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 10:23:42 PM AEST
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| Get in touch with your heart, where life can reside... waste not the time, or time will waste you.. be well.. |
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