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Cry's And Times.
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 08:05:29 AM in AEST
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I can not buy any time and I cry for all the times I lost in love.
My love can never buy the times we lost and please dont say bye to me.
I lost in love and in life but for now all I do is cry.
Dont take your love for granted.
Always cherish every waking moment with the one you love.
Dont cry when you lose in love just be happy for memories you shared in life.
I have to cry for I havent no time left for you.
I am sorry to tell you that my love is not true.
Always remember the times and dont cry.
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2006-04-05 08:05:29]
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Re: Cry's And Times.
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by trini on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 03:49:16 PM AEST
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not a bad write.
but your words are kinda choppy, you should try and make them flow a bit better
just my opinion. overall...
pretty good :)
keep posting
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Re: Cry's And Times.
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 04:42:10 PM AEST
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| Different, much different then your other style. You other style is great like in a Dr. Seuss sort of children's poetry. This is much more deep and human. I like it. Peace and hugs, Laura |
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Re: Cry's And Times.
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 10:45:01 AM AEST
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Nice write.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Cry's And Times.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 09:14:10 PM AEST
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Love is very delicate. Love is everything. We express ourselves, our real selves when we love. We have the time we have, what we are each given here on earth, it will soon end here.
Love, it will never end.
Hugs,
RaquelLeah |
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