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ponderus life..?
Contributed by
fake_emptyness
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Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 01:15:12 AM in AEST
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mock, mock, mock.
tease, tease, tease.
life goes on in circles.
yet we continue on the same road.
is there even a different road to take?
everyones life is the same.
cut, cut, cut.
bleeding, bleeding, bleeding.
showing im human too.
this crimson color, color so pure.
soaking in the whites of our eyes.
life is short yet its long.
life is illusionus yet we move on.
what a concept we ponder and phathem all to much.
Live...life...Die....
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2006-04-05 01:15:12]
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Re: ponderus life..?
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 01:22:06 AM AEST
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Friend between those live...life...die...there are those wonderful dots of events to remember and cherish upon.
Good work though.
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Re: ponderus life..?
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by Shmokin on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 08:11:14 AM AEST
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| nice write, liked the invention of the word illusionus,,, nice word,, |
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