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WHY BLAME THY HEART?
Contributed by
FRANCO
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Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 12:22:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Inside a murky penal cell, I saw
a pitiful pathetic man - is he a man or a brut? Hard to say,
held in his hand was his raw heart, bleeding and throbbing,
yet pleading to the beholder, for liberty,
from the agony of insane virulent liquor. Pathetic, dimwit
one he was, failed to perceive the
painful agony of his heart. I stood by his side,
queried, ‘why thou hold thy bleeding heart,
will it not painfully tear thee apart?’ His painful eyes
piercingly said, ‘blame me not for the deed,
but the broken heart I hold, trapped me into addiction, pushed
into the magic web of toxic passion, my lass in love and peace, perished
beyond recognition, here I pile like a rubbish, shivering
– naked without love, begging for mercy, and you think I’m crazy?’
‘Amoral man tainted his life ‘nd blamed all upon his bleeding heart,
yet set and rode gaily on the fatal path, blindfolded by a wretched drug.
(FRANCO)
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FRANCO
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Re: WHY BLAME THY HEART?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 12:44:12 AM AEST
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very sad here.. once you get into those things, its a real deep load of courage to go thru the pain of pulling yourself out.. and blessed is He who will ask the Lord for help while going through the pain. so sad, this poem.. brings tears to me..
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Re: WHY BLAME THY HEART?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 12:51:39 AM AEST
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Heartbreaking , honest and amazing write. Addiction is a disease, and it is treatable. Please dont beat your self up and humble your self to ask for help and know that God loves you . Moving write,
Hugs ,
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Re: WHY BLAME THY HEART?
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by Davinah on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 01:49:38 AM AEST
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I myself conquered an addiction. There is always a way back.
Moving write.
Greets,
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Re: WHY BLAME THY HEART?
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 02:13:24 AM AEST
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Well written. "Blame Thy Brain" Just take one day at a time.
"Take care"
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Re: WHY BLAME THY HEART?
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 10:51:48 AM AEST
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Franko,
This is a very moving piece. Addiction is a truly destructive force that affects everyone it touches. I relived some very painful memories while reading this.
Thank you again for sharing.
*Hugs*
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Re: WHY BLAME THY HEART?
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 02:48:53 PM AEST
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Touching write. I also relived some painful times while reading this..
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