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The Storm 2
Contributed by
pureheart07
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Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 11:59:49 PM in AEST
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The Storm 2
The storm brews inside always moving always there.
As much as me try to silent it it still wiats.
Striking bring back the pian you try so hard to forget.
Briging back it's furry & anger.
We wiat for it to calm so we can leave, but the storm never ends.
Our dearms & hope are the coluds.
That are chrused with the draknning power of it's might.
Our skys will forever remiane stormy.
Of the storm that will live in our darnked world.
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pureheart07
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2006-04-04 23:59:49]
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Re: The Storm 2
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 12:39:43 AM AEST
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My friend, after every strom that come's, follows the gentle peace and calmness, so to say, every crisis in life shall pass away like those dark clouds and make way for the bright sun shine of happiness.
your poem emit 's sadness but well conceived .
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Re: The Storm 2
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by pureheart07 on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 04:31:37 AM AEST
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