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LOVING YOU
Contributed by
Eveline
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Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 10:13:58 PM in AEST
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Since the first time I saw you, you stayed close in my mind. As the time goes by each day I see closer and closer. Your smile brings joy to my heart, and your looks makes me see clearly. There is something about your look. Is it a poem? Is it magic? Is it love? I dont know what to do you have my mind, my heart and my soul. our love is something no one can explain. Baby, with you I see love in a different way. My dream is to die in your arms. My love for you never ends.
Written By Eveline
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2006-04-04 22:13:58]
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Re: LOVING YOU
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by richcol7522 on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 10:29:18 PM AEST
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I like the way that you wrote this. I know how you feel...I feel the same way towards my wife. Very good job. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Re: LOVING YOU
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by ilovelillbj on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 03:47:40 AM AEST
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i really like this, particularly because someone has picked up on the feeling ive mused over before, that i want to die with my partner because i never want us to be apart... but i've never said it outloud as it's kinda heavy n maybe strange.. i cant explain it.. so thank you
x sarah x |
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