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I Thought Wrong
Contributed by
MSU_freak
on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 01:51:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Falling feathers,
Broken wings.
I thought here
angels would sing.
I felt the clouds
melt under my feet.
I felt the sun
come down on me.
I watched the water run icy cold
I thought here
I'd be home.
I saw castles crumble,
towers fall
I thought here
there was love for all.
But it's not the first time
that I've been wrong.
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MSU_freak
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2006-04-04 13:51:01]
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Re: I Thought Wrong
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by MSU_freak on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 01:55:47 PM AEST
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| I wrote this today...in just five minutes...don't know why...just felt the need to write... |
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Re: I Thought Wrong
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by Feeble-Paradox on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 05:38:50 PM AEST
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| Ya'know. I really... really.. REALLY hate the use of brackets... I try to stay away from brackets when I write.. But I loved this. It can use a touch on the finished in. But I did enjoy this. You captured and subdued my visual attention. |
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Re: I Thought Wrong
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by ThePhoenix on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 07:00:59 PM AEST
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| I really liked this. I thit a nerve. Excellent |
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Re: I Thought Wrong
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 07:44:09 PM AEST
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| Enjoyed reading this. It hit a nerve for me also. I know exactly how you feel. Better luck for you |
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