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I'm So Confused
Contributed by
The_Phantom
on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 07:25:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If I close my eyes
I get lost in time,
I don't remember my past,
I can't see my future,
I'm blind to my own fate,
And I can't see heaven's gate,
I can taste death,
But I can't feel my own breath,
I know it's time to go,
But something keeps telling me no,
I can see the flames of hell,
But I can hear church bells,
I feel as if I'm going insane,
But I have total control of my brain,
I feel like I'm trapped in a cage
Yet I have free regin,
I'm walking to my own casket,
Even though I feel fantsic,
I feel as if I'm being used,
But I'm not, I'm so confused.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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2002-07-27 07:25:01]
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Re: I'm So Confused
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by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 08:27:30 PM AEST
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sometimes it is easier to just forget.
fine job |
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Re: I'm So Confused
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by BlackFire9786 on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 04:42:40 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this poem, it expressed the confusion perfectly, i know how you feel! I'm off to read more of your work, very good, luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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Re: I'm So Confused
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 06:03:43 PM AEST
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| I can say I feel like this at times. I don't know what the future will bring but I would try to make my own future and if gods has planes for me I hope it's the guy I want. |
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