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MY BEAUTY TO BE
Contributed by
packatack
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Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 07:57:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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To my one true love whom I really do love.
Why oh why are you so far away from me?
I want you so even my Lord God knows!
So come right here where I can hold you now.
Until the night turns to day ready for another day.
While the sun rises up ready to light a beautiful lady!
I'll be right there beside you to tell how beautiful you look!
So come on baby lets ride all day.
Spend each minute talking about our good days ahead.
Then spending time how we can keep our love to stay.
My love my love lets not waste today!
I need you so like how I need my toes.
Only God really knows how our love can stay!
Come on girl let our world twirl and twirl.
Happy as a baby who loves mommys company.
And ready to end in a goodnite sleep.
Beauty such beauty can be seen deep within.
Oh how great it feels deep inside my being.
And last of all I say thank you from me.
Because only a God can reveal such a beauty.
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packatack
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2006-04-04 07:57:57]
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Re: MY BEAUTY TO BE
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by ANK_1321_ERW on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 09:21:56 AM AEST
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| The poem is very sweet. It touches my heart. You have captured the real idenity of love so well. Please keep writing with such a powerful pen. |
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Re: MY BEAUTY TO BE
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 01:04:21 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful.. outstanding... you really expressed a deep love for your sweetie..
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Re: MY BEAUTY TO BE
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by emystar on
Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 04:52:44 AM AEST
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Wow this is heavenly beautifull.
Good luck with your beauty to be.
Keep up the awesome writing.
huggs,
emy |
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