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MYSTIC DESTINY
Contributed by
FRANCO
on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 12:07:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sparkling vision in the eyes,
spectrum of desirer in the heart,
dreamt to reach the sky and beyond
sailed on a paper boat to fish my fancy fate.
Witty player that you are, amused thyself - soothingly
seated on your immortal easy chair sipping
heavenly nectar, waited leisurely to checkmate me,
holding the strings of my destiny.
Ignorant as I ‘m, set sail aboard the paper boat
hunting for my destiny desperately into the feral
fearsome ocean of life, till the sparkling vision dimmed
in my eyes, and the spectrum shattered to dust in my heart.
Failed to sense the puppet string steer the
game of my life, he seated simply smiling there;
the humble master, keeper of the count
of the ocean sand – kept playing hide ‘nd seek with me.
None beyond the living movement could be moved by me.
Arrogant as me, anxiously stalked after for my dreamy destiny
(FRANCO)
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2006-04-04 00:07:22]
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Re: MYSTIC DESTINY
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 12:20:55 AM AEST
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This poem has a hypnotic quality to it , I love it . Well done
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Re: MYSTIC DESTINY
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by SilentPwn on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 12:23:22 AM AEST
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I love so much.
Wow, yeh. Love it.
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Re: MYSTIC DESTINY
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 12:31:32 AM AEST
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This poem holds you captive until the end, great write.
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