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Stomach Rot
Contributed by
DarkFaerie
on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 10:45:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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the hate
i have for you
curls like rot
in the pit
of my stomach
it chills me
drags me down
you crept in
silent as a mouse
stole my happiness
moved into my house
i loathe you
and everything
you may stand for
id love to force
all this pain
hiding inside
on the person
who started this
the who deserves it
Copyright ©
DarkFaerie
... [
2006-04-03 22:45:02]
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Re: Stomach Rot
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by broken_cookie on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 10:59:46 PM AEST
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| i love it!!! |
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Re: Stomach Rot
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by wikedladi on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 01:21:32 AM AEST
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| good write! I'd say kick their ass! Might make you feel better ; ) xoxox |
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Re: Stomach Rot
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 04:45:16 AM AEST
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powerful piece with a strong msg.
some interesting metaphors, set along a dark themed background.
I'd hate to be the person who ***** you off. lol
Good piece! |
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Re: Stomach Rot
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by Dizza_13 on
Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 10:48:23 PM AEST
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very powerful, good stuff
diz |
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Re: Stomach Rot
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 09:24:00 PM AEST
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This poem speaks 4 itself and that's as far as i'll go with that. 2 b sure, i'm truly 4 your pain.
Ben |
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Re: Stomach Rot
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 09:26:51 PM AEST
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truly sorry 4 your pain . . .
Ben |
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