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Ocean Song
Contributed by
PurpleStarr
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Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 08:48:36 PM in AEST
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Silky waves roaring ashore, dancing among the rocks, smoothly gliding out again.
Cool salty air rippling in with the tide.
Scream of the seagull and the whisper of the ocean current.
Chilly damp sand molds to my feet.
Light tang of salt in the air.
Reeds dance softly, swaying in the wind.
Ocean song, plays on and on.
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2006-04-03 20:48:36]
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Re: Ocean Song
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 10:24:41 PM AEST
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Nicely done. Poetry of the sea is very refreshing, and it's one of our greatest sources of inspiration, I think. Keep writing.
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Re: Ocean Song
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by mazeof_darkness on
Wednesday, 5th April 2006 @ 10:10:25 PM AEST
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| Sounds so wonderfull i want to be there. Love the wrtie!! |
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Re: Ocean Song
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by Lilly-Quill on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 09:48:09 PM AEST
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I think, perhaps, I could dance to such a song; though, dancing with the feet is one thing, but dancing with the heart is another.
Oceanicly descriptive!
~Lilly-Quill |
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