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Looking Out a Two Story Building

Contributed by exodus on Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 07:38:47 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

It's the least anyone could really do.
Like a fumble and a drop into...

Look out
Here it comes
There it is
Stupid does

She stands
All alone
In the night
Like a stone

Set so
Suddenly still
She won't
Recover will

Will over
Beauty, never
Happily stationery
Happily ever

Had she
Come down-
Stairs with
A frown

I would
Never see
Happ...
Happily

Ever after
Retrofitting
All apologies
Unforgiving

Stupid, son-
of-a
No way
La la la

There was a girl. Stupid is as stupid does.
No one saw her, like she never even was-
Supposed to be, nonexistent like a sorry apology.
Fixed in whatever they thing she should try and ought to be.

Feeling so tired, feeling so down, almost blind and near deaf to any sound.

Stupid is as stupid does, what else could there ever never be?
Kick it like a habit that no one likes and you hope they will never see.
If it was fact that heaven wasn't there, would you trade all your chips and run?
Or would you kick back with and utter, turn up and bake under the sun?

Legal tendencies that bore you, like the satisfaction of you getting found?
Like the rules that no one listens to, realistic like your bloody head smashed on the dirty ground.

It's not my job to present to you this conundrum, jump out your window instead.
Flip as fast as you can so you can land on your simplistically redundant, big ole fat ole head.

Copyright © exodus ... [ 2006-04-03 19:38:47]
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Re: Looking Out a Two Story Building (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 08:26:25 PM AEST
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I enjoyed the style you used here, carrying it along. Nicely done with a message sealed.
Michelle

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