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Failed Love's Cost
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 06:59:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Hearts left to go alone
Slowly turning to stone
Broken always on guard
Every moment getting hard
Fences built higher each day
Looking at each other, nothing to say
Eventually no longer even friends
Apathy is where the story ends
For others no more room
Encompassing is the gloom
Darkness overtakes all
Another romance takes a fall
How long till the light is let in?
How long till new love begins?
The answer is not ours to know
The answer is where the wind blows
Two hearts forever to each other lost
And on the very soul a high cost
Carried on to other relationships
After strong words forever let slip
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2006-04-03 18:59:34]
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Re: Failed Love's Cost
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by shelby on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 07:04:20 PM AEST
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so very touching and sad my friend.Beautiful in its message.
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Re: Failed Love's Cost
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by crimson_regret420 on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 07:13:09 PM AEST
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Really great write. I can really relate to the feelings you portrayed through this poem. Keep it up!
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Re: Failed Love's Cost
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 07:17:58 PM AEST
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~*Shari*~
A sad, deep and heartfelt write. I can so much relate to ur write. I s'pose alot of us can. You have written this so well ~*Shari*~
The message so loud and clear. Keep penning my dear friend.
*love n hugs*
~*susie Q*~ |
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Re: Failed Love's Cost
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by MyNameIsJonas on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 08:33:16 PM AEST
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Like...wow
I like this poem a lot |
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Re: Failed Love's Cost
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 05:02:54 AM AEST
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How long till the light is let in?
How long till new love begins?
The answer is not ours to know
The answer is where the wind blows
These lines in particular grabbed me, made me think about destiny and how much we control it our self, or is it already mapped out for us?
Great writing.
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