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A TEAR
Contributed by
Adelle
on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 05:43:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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A tear-
So perfect so real
A tear-
So perfectly clear-
A tear-
Of water-
Trapped in a bubble
I cried- he cried
I wept he wept
Tears one by one
Dropped all the way down
Heavy like led, they splat on the ground
Loosing their perfect shape, so round-
A tear-
So perfect so real
A tear-
So perfectly clear
A tear-
Of water-
No longer in a bubble
It rained-
It poured-
I prayed
To the lord-
Drops larger than mine
Fall down from the sky-
The heavens were sending down their cry
The rain drops so perfectly clear
So beautiful- so sincere
Landing in my puddle of tear drops
Thunder crashing
Lightening lashing
Clouds thickening
The rain intensifying
The rain then turning to blood
Pouring falling
The storm encircling-
Round about me
The thunder crashing
Loudly and boldly
But it is different
Voices are crying with it
Like a perfect violin sound
Hearing the earth shake,
Was like hearing a violin shake
Like a vibrato so beautiful
Music was lashing out
Lightening coming about
A light brighter than bright
Too bright for my eyes
Shielding them I hear his cries
Louder and louder
The rain drops larger and larger
A tear-
So perfectly un-clear
Dark red
In symbolism of his blood
A tear so perfectly weighted
So perfectly shaped
Washing my own cries away
I wanted him to take my pain
I pleaded that he would take it away
Instead he cried with me this way
Dropping tears from the sky
In red reminding me, for me he did die
Copyright ©
Adelle
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2006-04-03 17:43:45]
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Re: A TEAR
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by trini on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 05:47:42 PM AEST
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nice write. i liked it, and i'm not nomally one for spiriual poems but this one is quite good if so i do say so myself.
keep up the good work
-trini |
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Re: A TEAR
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 06:47:10 PM AEST
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| well done a great write |
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Re: A TEAR
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by FRANCO on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 02:08:14 PM AEST
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It is the perfect time to read a poem about a man who died for you and me, for all the sins we committed; it is the season of the misery of our lord Jesus Christ (i.e. Lent season) and your poem appears right when one tries to brush up his/her faith. Well done.
FRANCO
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Re: A TEAR
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by candysears on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 09:10:47 PM AEST
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This is very good!
I really liked this write!
God Bless! |
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