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Innocent man
Contributed by
Somnium
on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 05:32:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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Breathe it in and hold that breath
It's your last as an innocent man
Ignore your heart that races
And run
Into the building and take
Take what you want
What you need
Whatever, it's not an issue
In your bag so noone sees
And make your escape
With sweets and chocolates
To shut them up
Your only 10 and
Your a criminal
Well I'm telling
On you
Copyright ©
Somnium
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2006-04-03 17:32:43]
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Re: Innocent man
(User Rating: 1 )
by trini on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 05:39:58 PM AEST
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heh... this was cute
The ending made me laugh.
real good picture. being about childhood or not, i enjoyed it.
Keep posting you have a knack for it.
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Re: Innocent man
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 04:30:31 AM AEST
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I thought this was a serious one about a bank robber or summat!
Till I read the last 4 lines lol!
This has gotta be worth 5 stars.
J |
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