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Drunken tears on the eyes of this child
Contributed by
Somnium
on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 05:27:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Ah so subtley you take
it from my grasp
Ah so sweetly you tell
theres nothing wrong
Ah so darkly my
suspiscions cloud my thoughts
And how easily your
flattery flows
through you tainted vortex
that you call a mouth
Circular soundwaves
mean nothing to me
only to your twisted mind
Empty your threats
that still make me weap
Solemn your words that
Tell me to jump
Secret the lies
that I could not hear
Behind her back and
behind her's too
You pathetic little children
Your twice my age and I have
to console you
Well, boo hoo and deal with it
Well in to the oven
with your mockery
Ill feed it to you
along with the blood
that you tore from them
using the knife that you
gave me to
do your works
Seldom this truth will
return to you
now I've locked you in
fallen and weak
unclean fool
these words hurt me no more
Stay there a while, like
a child on the stair
And think about it
a lifetime or two.
Copyright ©
Somnium
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2006-04-03 17:27:13]
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Re: Drunken tears on the eyes of this child
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by trini on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 05:34:25 PM AEST
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WOW.
very powerful i really really liked this write. fresh and devinely dark
keep up the great work
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Re: Drunken tears on the eyes of this child
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 08:57:16 PM AEST
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| i agree with trini very powerful and moving. I love the emotion and the style. Refreshing great job! |
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Re: Drunken tears on the eyes of this child
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 05:08:32 AM AEST
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You write well after a glass of wine...
Don't wanna encourage you but i'm better after a bottle or two!
Loved the title as well very inventive.
J. |
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