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TIME CHANGES EVERYTHING
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 04:30:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You were here in the beinning
but not in the end
you said you loved me
or was it all pretend
the secrets you hide in the dark
will soon come to light
i thought we cared for each other
now all we do is fight
you showed me your true colors
or were you just fakin
i gave you my heart
all you did was take it
i believe in you and me
even went as far as on one bended knee
now your asking for me to forgive you
and my answer was **** you
Copyright ©
Tiffyo4
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2006-04-03 16:30:14]
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Re: TIME CHANGES EVERYTHING
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by sandypoet on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 05:18:15 PM AEST
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| I felt your love for this was very very much. Till at the end. If you loved so much at the beginning. And spoke like you did at the end. Did you really love at all. Love is forgiving. AND LOVE is asking to be forgiven. great write stir up alot of feelings in me.. |
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Re: TIME CHANGES EVERYTHING
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by trini on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 05:50:57 PM AEST
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The love sounded pure. The ending kinda threw me off but you know... thats life...
Always surprising.
Keep up the great work.
-trini |
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