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CRYMSON NIGHT
Contributed by
Forgotten_soul
on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 11:37:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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It is a night of dark desire
a song of ethreal pain
Wolves vent their howls
The eternal one wakens.
Fog shrouds her pale form
An everlasting desire.
Her raven hair cascades
over ivory shoulders
and her scarlet lips part slightly
to taste the blood
streaming from the pale flesh beneath her.
Copyright ©
Forgotten_soul
... [
2006-04-03 11:37:16] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: CRYMSON NIGHT
(User Rating: 1 ) by flamingblade on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 12:18:32 PM AEST (User
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very dark
kinda depressing but thtas what i like |
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Re: CRYMSON NIGHT
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 12:31:27 PM AEST (User
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dark and sensual in a way. Good write. I like it |
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Re: CRYMSON NIGHT
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 01:04:31 PM AEST (User
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Not bad alittle short but good. |
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Re: CRYMSON NIGHT
(User Rating: 1 ) by chaos78 on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 01:07:05 PM AEST (User
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i like good write |
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Re: CRYMSON NIGHT
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 01:40:38 PM AEST (User
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I liked it we need somemore vamo writers amoung us here we have kind of died out hee hee
Michelle |
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