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Untitled
Contributed by
Man_On_High
on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 04:50:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I raise my cup to the one made up
Of loveliness alone,
A woman of the kindest way,
A vision all my own.
To whom the better elements
And kindly stars have blest
Her form so fair, that like the air,
'Tis all of Heaven's best!
Her every tone is music's own,
Like those of morning birds,
Yet something more than melody
Dwells ever in her words;
The secrets of her heart, are they
And from her lips, each flows:
As one may see the honeybee
Take issue with the rose.
Affections are as thoughts to her;
The measure of her hours
Her silky mane's the fragrancy
Of April's youngest flowers.
Upon her face, one glance would trace
Her beauty to a pain..
And of her voice, to all she parts,
The sound would long remain-
To hope our paths should ever cross
Might all but seem in vain:
...as life might be all poetry,
my every word, soliloquy..
and "lonely," ...just a name.
Billy 2006 ..and counting
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Man_On_High
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2006-04-03 04:50:03]
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 05:17:18 AM AEST
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Beautiful words Billy true poetry;
This particulary stood out for me:
Her every tone is music's own,
Like those of morning birds,
Yet something more than melody
Dwells ever in her words;
J.
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Re: Untitled
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 07:58:40 AM AEST
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How melodic!!!
Very well done, Billy....
Keep 'em coming...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Untitled
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 02:07:06 PM AEST
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Love's down and counting. Such beautiful work penned from your heart. Counting down until forever and eternity. Just my take on the splendid beauty.
Rita |
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 05:17:57 PM AEST
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wow very well done on this piece Billy.
I really enjoy reading this.
You get 5 stars from me.
hugs |
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 12:52:35 AM AEST
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Affections are as thoughts to her;
The measure of her hours
Her silky mane's the fragrancy
Of April's youngest flowers
~~~~~~~~~~
I read this and then again, and just sat here trying to find a way to put into words how lovely this poem is . I find your writing amazing , another five Billy,
LG |
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 07:10:41 AM AEST
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Unbelievable beauty Billy.
This is one of the most precious and blatant outpourings of
the soul I've come across in a long while.
Your stirring of emotions and sweet words saturated in an
essence so positively soft, it could melt any frost bitten heart,
brings a tear to the eye. (Literally)
Your gorgeous muse is inspiring brilliant work, my friend.
I can not tell you how much I love this. It's exquisite.
~Breezy |
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by Mangos on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 08:24:26 PM AEST
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I thought all the pieces just fell into their into their respective places brilliantly.
The rest speaks for itself.
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Re: Untitled
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 02:06:23 PM AEST
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Beautifully written piece.
Great outpouring from the heart.
Thank you for sharing
*Hugs*
~Shannon |
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Re: Untitled
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 09:10:48 PM AEST
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~*Billy*~
One never tires from visiting ur pages as one is always impressed with the remarkable contents of ur pages my dear friend.
An exquiste and phenomenal masterpiece penned by a very special and talented poet. I wish you all the best dearest ~*Billy*~ cos u are a kind and very deserving soul.
The stars above have made a special place for u. For u r amongst the best writers of all times. Shine on my sweet friend and thanks for such a beautiful outpouring from ur beautiful loving heart ~*Billy*~
~love always and forever~
~*Suzie Q*` |
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