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Slow In Coming
Contributed by
lonely_boy
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Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 03:17:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Death is slow in coming
So I grab the silver blade
I slice the flesh and I am grinning
Time has stopped on this day
The music is blaring and the blood is draining
My eyes roll into the back of my head
The light fades and I drop the knife
I fall to the ground: the sleep is nice
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2006-04-03 03:17:02]
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Re: Slow In Coming
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by guernicalullaby on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 03:25:17 AM AEST
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I think i write the best poems when i am upset.
they seem to be more powerful.
your peom is sad, but powerful. I enjoy it very much. |
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Re: Slow In Coming
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by bethwood on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 09:31:56 AM AEST
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| reading peoples poetry is like reading a diary, when i look back over all my work i have done in the past i notice the dark times. it was very brave of you to share this with us, thankyou. |
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