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i'm here
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 09:11:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When your all alone and need a friend
I'm here...
when your life is void of all cheer
remember me I'm still here
in the middle of the night when all seems lost
pick up the phone i'm here
for when your feel you can't pay the cost...
remember me i'm still here..
when i look for love i think of you
when i need a friend i need you
when i miss you
i tell you i'm here.
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Re: i'm here
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by xAegisx on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 09:17:01 PM AEST
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| i like this one. the rhythym started to fade towards the end but nonetheless it was a good poem. |
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Re: i'm here
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by Alison on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 10:08:20 PM AEST
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| good write has a very sweet feeling to it. |
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Re: i'm here
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by whiteleo1984 on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 11:46:17 PM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: i'm here
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 01:42:33 AM AEST
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| Wonderful write. So much love and emotion in such a short poem. I can totally relate to this. Its like you were reading my mind. For i feel the same way for the one i love |
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Re: i'm here
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 05:27:51 AM AEST
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This is so true.
I think a lot of people miss the point of what love is about nowadays.
Good poetry.
J. |
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Re: i'm here
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by lillyjane on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 06:07:28 AM AEST
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| You sound like the perfect friend, we all need friends like that.. xx |
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