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Until my time Ends

Contributed by packatack on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 07:27:28 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Until my time ends here I feel like nobody is ever near
Nobody wants to talk to a native that fulfill fears whos feared
Sensing power coming nearer you decide to disappear
Geeweez why does everybody don't care
Sometimes I wish I can disappear too
But whats beyond the individuals time if he ends his time too
Damn damn I think i'm losing it
I don't even care so what are you doing here
Come on man, Man of Life Please get me some relief when
Times feels like this
Loneliness is over powering me so much
People faces have a angry look when I pass thru the door
Only time when someone gets a look at you
Until my time ends I don't want to end like this
So please Lord come here and fulfill my life with Love

Copyright © packatack ... [ 2006-04-02 19:27:28]
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Re: Until my time Ends (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 09:44:58 AM AEST
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There is a lot personally i can say about this poem but i will not. If you want a friend ask for one and be one. It is hard because you will have to get used to your loneliness you will have to question your motives and ask for forgiveness. I saw the intro to your latest poem and i am sad that you think no one is listening to you when the truth is that we do not know you. I don't think I can help you but i can be a friend if you want.

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