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The Carpenter and the Light House Keeper
Contributed by
justme03
on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 07:07:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Oh Carpenter,
will thou mend me?
Mend my broken heart
and my broken soul.
Oh, Carpenter,
will thou mend this
lamp to guide my way
to the path I seeketh?
Extend your hand,
with which you mend,
unto the Light House Keeper.
Give him the lamp you mended
so that the path may be
enlightened--
the path of which I seek.
Oh, Carpenter,
mend my sorrows and
mend all my tomorrows
so that when I reach them
there is no fear.
Oh, Light House Keeper,
rekindle the flame in
the mended lamp.
Light my path
and enlighten my mended soul.
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justme03
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2006-04-02 19:07:09]
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Re: The Carpenter and the Light House Keeper
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 07:11:43 PM AEST
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| well thought out poem.. i liked this one a great deal. |
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Re: The Carpenter and the Light House Keeper
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by jrod56 on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 12:07:31 AM AEST
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I like the poem overall great feeling in your writing it was just to , well you repeated too many words find another way to say it without repeating like a broken rcord overall though u were very good
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