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Help Me
Contributed by
DarkFaerie
on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 01:41:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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burn me
cut me
earn me
gut me
slice me
rape me
price me
reshape me
taint me
hate me
saint me
sedate me
lost me
weak me
tossed me
meek me
kill me
bleed me
fulfill me
freed me
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DarkFaerie
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2006-04-02 13:41:53]
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Re: Help Me
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by corrupted_minds on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 08:30:01 PM AEST
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nothing else to say but... i love it.
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Re: Help Me
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 05:43:48 PM AEST
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nice i like this one! im glad you keep working with this style :)
you sum it all up nicely here good job! A+++ |
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Re: Help Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 08:58:15 AM AEST
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I can feel your anguish in this poem, your emotions are conveyed very innocently but
deeply, hope things get better 4 u.
Ben |
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