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Inside you
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 12:57:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Searching to fill voids of pain
only to find you've looked in the wrong spaces
A memory of me remains
Buried deep
no one knows
but through your heart
thoughts and feelings of me constantly flow
Haunting your soul
I am with in
Run away I'll catch up
In your dreams , you'll remember
what was lost and what was the cost
Screaming to be set free
I laugh in your heart... the only way possible
is to face me
JENNI
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Re: Inside you
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 05:05:12 PM AEST
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Finding true poets.. your heart is love.. I pray you keep your love channel open, for all love shall be captured within you.. You are truly an inspiration of love with this write.. I value it to the highest..
hugs,
RaquelLeah.. who am I to say. A child of God. |
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Re: Inside you
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 06:08:19 PM AEST
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You've expressed yourself well here Jenni.
J. |
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Re: Inside you
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 06:57:24 PM AEST
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| Jennittude, What a superb piece of poetry. Great write. Thanks for sharing. Peace, Laura |
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Re: Inside you
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 09:48:12 PM AEST
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| Great write Jenni, it's as if you are laughing in the face of pain...Mike |
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Re: Inside you
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by JGB on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 02:37:21 AM AEST
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I like the way it was written.
Good job. |
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Re: Inside you
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by Jen54 on
Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 10:49:22 PM AEST
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wonderful write. I really love it. I reminds me of someone that haunts me. Maybe I should just face them. Keep up the great writing!
-Jen |
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Re: Inside you
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by Michael_Bevins on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 01:33:37 PM AEST
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| Very nice write. You express your emotion very vividly and its beautiful. Keep it up. ;) |
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Re: Inside you
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 06:31:12 PM AEST
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"I laugh in your heart"
LOVE that line !!
Jenni, this was wonderful. I love your word choices. Positively flawless!
~Breezy |
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Re: Inside you
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 11:46:57 PM AEST
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Wow, Jennittude, you express your feelings perfectly.
A very enjoyable poem from the Jennittude!!!
Thank you for sharing.
Tim
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Re: Inside you
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by wizard on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 02:13:06 PM AEST
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excellent post...i can feel your emotion in each word.
wiz |
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Re: Inside you
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 11:24:48 PM AEST
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Wow what a powerful piece.
I am impress :) |
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Re: Inside you
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 11:58:39 PM AEST
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I love the direct approach of this poem, it sustains a relentlessness, an in your face
hauting while keeping a vigil from the minds eye. You write well, and this was very compelling 2 read.
Ben |
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Re: Inside you
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by NDean on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 02:56:17 PM AEST
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| The rhythm, syntax and vocab create a feeling of being hauted too. [sorry for all the analysy language. Doing my GCSE mocks. cant help it LOL] anyway. cool poem. have a look a mine if you want. |
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Re: Inside you
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by Linds on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 06:50:14 PM AEST
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i love this. it's amazing, i can relate a lot.
Awesome write.
Lindsay |
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