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''All you had to do was make sure he took his pill's!''

Contributed by je2ica3 on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 08:13:39 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



i wish i couldnt cry another tear. I only wish life was easier more simple. Less hatered and temptations.
i wish people could show there love for otheres not just announce it. Because really what does words' do for you .a few sounds and syllables. They make you feel good for awhile but they dont keep you alive.
you have to show your love. Take care of your loved ones. that is if you really do love them.

Dont check on them once a month just to make sure their still living. Just because you see them breathing and hear their simple words doesnt mean they feel alive on the inside.

"I can't belive you did that to him. Checked on him once gave him a few bucks for the daily bread and milk. You were his daughter his own flesh and blood! But you let him die ,how could you do that. Y ou took him away from me he could have lived another ten year's. I loved him, he was my grandfather my fathers father. All you had to do was make sure he took his pill's!!!!!"




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Re: ''All you had to do was make sure he took his pill's!'' (User Rating: 1 )
by slogan on Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 12:03:46 PM AEST
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Read my poem ""Forgive and forget""...Death is a part of life and should be lived without fearing it as it should be.. this is the natural course of things as for sorrow it reminds you that someone special was once a part of your life and should always be remember, cherish and never forgotten...jh


Re: ''All you had to do was make sure he took his pill's!'' (User Rating: 1 )
by Lo2681 on Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 10:39:15 PM AEST
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I am very sorry for your loss but I am sure that he is in a better place now. Try to be happy knowing that he is watching over you and smiling because he knows how much you love him...and not just because u said it ...because you showed it:) ~Lo




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