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Man in Slogan Hat
Contributed by
faiton
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Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 06:45:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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There’s a man lives down my way
It’s man in slogan hat.
Everyday and every hour slogan changes on Slogan man’s hat.
Sometimes slogan’s cheerful, carefree and bright.
Sometimes slogan makes no sense but is fun,
But today, this week, this month, this year, this life
Slogan just says ‘Bleak’.
And Man in Slogan Hat’s demeanour tells a sorry tale,
An epic story of failure and despair,
A slogan hat in need of repair.
Felt worn through, lining dirty brown
And where Slogan man puts his slogan
It’s cracked and yellow like a well-loved domino.
Copyright ©
faiton
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2006-04-02 06:45:11]
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Re: Man in Slogan Hat
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 11:13:45 AM AEST
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This was a cool poem. I liked it.. I thought it was well worded and flowed good.. Great job..
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Re: Man in Slogan Hat
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by Spike on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 06:13:41 AM AEST
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There's a message there, for sure; I just can't read it. More obtuse social commentary.
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